Sometimes writers choose a word influenced by another word "in the neighborhood." This can be to good effect or, more often than not, lazy and mindless word choice. I have called it the "echoic" effect.
Fortunately in the instance of Picture Legends Writer Abbe Pascal's description of a photograph, she has a winner in beginning this way:
"Frost crystals spangle leaves in Spokane, Washington."
You can see and hear the echo in the words "spangle" and "Spokane." It's the [sp] and the [an] in both words.
My point is "spangle" is musical with "Spokane" whether consciously chosen or not, but may have been unconsciously selected from a multitude of possibilities due to the anticipated sound of the city name just ahead! And "spangle" fits the photo perfectly.
Portion of Charles Gurche's Photograph. Click on it to enlarge. |
(From the Dec. 1st through 7th page of the National Geographic Society's 2014 engagement calendar Beautiful Landscapes.)
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